:: OMGWTF! Oh No, You Di'n't ::

Did my English teacher just dis me and my writing in my English Qualifying Paper I? Well, I'm sorry, it's just that the topic sucks so bad and I had no idea what to write.

Note the highlighted ones in his comments; which I like and don't like!

Dis

Flattered

His comments:

Flare, your use of the language and advanced grammatical form put you at the head of the class. Your writing is excellent. You will most certainly get a "B" on the writing exam. To get the "A" your story will need to be special. First, it needs to capture the topic and use the topic perfectly. I'm afraid your lost video game wouldn't quite capture the topic's idea of "something precious". Use your knowledge of literature to push your writing to the next level. How would Anita Desai write on this topic? Looking back now, instead of a video game, what object could you choose to make this piece more powerful? I'll be cheering for you on the O'Level exam!

Apparently, Syafiqah, Trish and I were quite offended to what he actually said something during our English lesson. He's being way critisizing our piece of writing and yes -- people who likes to write are quite easily offended. That's our masterpiece. Not his! If necklace (Syafiqah's idea) or video game (My idea) isn't what he called "something precious", then what is?

Also, speaking of which, using my knowledge of literature so that my writing would make it better is quite wise enough but; you're comparing me with Anita Desai? Totally vehemence! Each author have different type of writing skills -- and of course ideas. Don't effing compare me with a half-German and half-Indian literature author.

I mean hey! Video games is way precious than what you'd think. They're friends. That's a total disgrace, if I may say so.